The error analysis chart helped to identify different
mistakes that I had in my entry. It helped me a lot because I could reflect
about my mistakes how I wrote it and how I should write. As well, I can improve
my writing skill. After doing this exercises, I felt more confident to put in
practice all I have learned. I would like to do this exercise with my future
students because I can evaluate the progress that they have in learning English
but the most important thing is that they can correct by themselves.
Don Bosco University School Languages Teaching Practicum II /2016
ERROR ANALYSIS CHART
(spot the mistake in the sentence or phrase and highlight the correct
and incorrect part )
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I wrote…
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I must have written …, because.
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1. I consider to myself helpful person,
2.
I decide to study it because I think
3.
I hope
everything it will be ok
4. in others cases
5. They get shameful when somebody see the changes
6. there are teenagers that know what going to happen
7. may have the most difficulty with menstruation
8. They have to explain before to come an adolescence
9.
Piaget describe
the individual develop in four stage
10. In addition, teenagers has more reasonable
thinking
11.
It is the
interaction that adolescence have with friends, family, community.
12. Erick Erickson
said that the adolescences should determine
13. It means that many time, teenagers all the
things that their peers do or say (drink, smoke and sex) to be accepted in
the group.
14. As teachers, we can be positive things in
their life and have confident attitude
15.
we can use
learning strategies actively engages students
16. It help them to active the brain
17. I thought that
every teenagers changes
18. are teenagers
that know what going to happen with the teenager’s period
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1.
I consider to
myself a helpful
person. (The article “a” is missing).
2.
I decided to study it because I
think ( the verb “decide” has to be in
past tense)
3.
I hope
everything will be ok ( the subject “IT” is not need)
4.
In other cases, ( “others” must not be pluralized)
5.
They get
shameful when somebody sees
the changes (somebody is third person and for this reason, the verb “see” has
to conjugate with “s”)
6.
there are
teenagers that know what’s going to happen (the verb “ TO BE” is missing)
7.
may have the most difficulty with
menstruation
“Research findings suggest that
adolescent girls who are unprepared for the physical and emotional changes of
puberty may have the most difficulty with menstruation.”
(This quotation is textual from the book. Nevertheless, “difficulty
can be in plural).
8.
They have to
explain before beginning the adolescence. (The verb does not match with the
idea).
9.
Piaget describes the individual
development in four stages (the subject is third person and the verb has to
be conjugated with “S”).
10.
In addition,
teenagers has more reasonable thinking (the subject is plural).
11. It is the interaction that adolescents have
with friends, family and community (the word “adolescents” is misspelled).
12. Erick Erickson said that the adolescents should determine (the word “adolescents” is
misspelled)
13.
It means that
many times,
teenagers do all the things that their peers say (drink, smoke and sex) to be
accepted in the group. (The order of the words is not ok).
14. As teachers, we can be a positive
influence in their life and have confident attitude the verb. (The idea is
unclear).
15.
We can use
learning strategies to engage students actively. (The adverb’s position is at
the end.)
16.
It help them to activate the brain.
(“Actively” is the adv. and “activate”
the verb).
17.
I thought that
every teenager changes (“every” is singular and the noun teenagers is
not pluralize).
18.
Are teenagers
that know what´s going to happen with the teenager’s period (the verb “TO BE”
is missing)
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I am in agreement with you karla, this activity helps us to improve writing skills, I also meant that force us to set ourselves at the time of writing, sometimes we don’t realize about the importance of the good writing. Now I am conscious that I need more practice because I am forgetting some grammatical details.
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