Wednesday, August 24, 2016

Error Analysis Chart



The error analysis chart helped to identify different mistakes that I had in my entry. It helped me a lot because I could reflect about my mistakes how I wrote it and how I should write. As well, I can improve my writing skill. After doing this exercises, I felt more confident to put in practice all I have learned. I would like to do this exercise with my future students because I can evaluate the progress that they have in learning English but the most important thing is that they can correct by themselves. 


Don Bosco University                  School Languages                                                  Teaching Practicum II /2016

ERROR ANALYSIS CHART
(spot the mistake in the sentence or phrase and highlight the correct and incorrect part )
I wrote…
I must have written …, because.
1.     I consider to myself helpful person, 


2.      I decide to study it because I think


3.     I hope everything it will be ok


4.     in others cases


5.     They get shameful when somebody see the changes


6.     there are teenagers that know what going to happen



7.     may have the most difficulty with menstruation










8.     They have to explain before to come an adolescence


9.     Piaget describe the individual develop in four stage



10.      In addition, teenagers has more reasonable thinking


11.    It is the interaction that adolescence have with friends, family, community. 


12.     Erick Erickson said that the adolescences should determine



13.   It means that many time, teenagers all the things that their peers do or say (drink, smoke and sex) to be accepted in the group.

14.  As teachers, we can be positive things in their life and have confident attitude


15.     we can use learning strategies actively engages students




16.  It help them to active the brain



17.   I thought that every teenagers changes




18.    are teenagers that know what going to happen with the teenager’s period
1.     I consider to myself a helpful person. (The article “a” is missing).

2.     I decided to study it because I think ( the verb “decide”  has to be in past tense)

3.     I hope everything will be ok ( the subject “IT” is not need)

4.     In other cases,  ( “others” must not be pluralized)

5.     They get shameful when somebody sees the changes (somebody is third person and for this reason, the verb “see” has to conjugate with “s”)
6.     there are teenagers that know what’s going to happen (the verb “ TO BE” is missing)

7.      may have the most difficulty with menstruation
 “Research findings suggest that adolescent girls who are unprepared for the physical and emotional changes of puberty may have the most difficulty with menstruation.”
(This quotation is textual from the book. Nevertheless, “difficulty can be in plural).


8.     They have to explain before beginning the adolescence. (The verb does not match with the idea).

9.     Piaget describes the individual development in four stages (the subject is third person and the verb has to be conjugated with “S”).

10.   In addition, teenagers has more reasonable thinking (the subject is plural).

11.    It is the interaction that adolescents have with friends, family and community (the word “adolescents” is misspelled).

12.   Erick Erickson said that the adolescents should determine (the word “adolescents” is misspelled)


13.    It means that many times, teenagers do all the things that their peers say (drink, smoke and sex) to be accepted in the group. (The order of the words is not ok).

14. As teachers, we    can be a positive influence in their life and have confident attitude the verb. (The idea is unclear).

15.       We can use learning strategies to engage students actively. (The adverb’s position is at the end.)

16.    It help them to activate the brain. (“Actively” is the adv.  and “activate” the verb).

17.    I thought that every teenager changes (“every” is singular and the noun teenagers is not pluralize).

18.   Are teenagers that know what´s going to happen with the teenager’s period (the verb “TO BE” is missing)




1 comment:

  1. I am in agreement with you karla, this activity helps us to improve writing skills, I also meant that force us to set ourselves at the time of writing, sometimes we don’t realize about the importance of the good writing. Now I am conscious that I need more practice because I am forgetting some grammatical details.

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